Praise I am so incredibly proud of all

Praise  I am so incredibly proud of all

Praise

I am so incredibly proud of all of you. You have
worked exceptionally hard & it has paid off.
You have mostly listened to the advice that you
have been given. The majority of you used the
magic formula which allowed you to use the
semi-colon & colon in the first paragraph; adding
to your overall marks.
The majority of you structured your writing in
inventive and creative ways this really sets your
work apart from the rest.
A special mention to: for truly outstanding work.

Dedicated
Improvement
Reflection Time

Use your purple pen time to
Respond to the individualised
feedback on your work.
Complete your purple pen task
which is on your feedback sheet.
Complete the pupil comment box
on your sheet.

Even better if

Listen to the advice that is given use the magic
formula & DAFOREST to help structure your work.
Boost your vocabulary! There are two main ways
to do thisuse the thesaurus in class and keep
up with your reading. Reading is the best way to
boost your vocabulary and develop your writing.
Remember that you are writing for an audience.
You need to keep them in mind you cant just
list some reasons & think youve done your job!
Use a range of punctuation! Of course, you use
your usual full stops, commas, exclamation
marks and question marks. However, try using a
colon, semi-colon, brackets, hyphens or ellipsis
(see what I did there?)

Year 9 Exam Feedback
9X/En1
Miss Simss Superstars

Stretch yourself
Grab a thesaurus & try to develop your vocabulary.
Developing your Content & Organisation
Try using a repeated phrase to add to the structure of your work.
Can you add a one sentence paragraph for effect?
Can you include x2 one word sentences for effect?
Can you include a semantic field?
Developing your accuracy
Can you include a colon in a sentence?
Can you include a semi colon in a sentence?
Have you got any spellings to work on?
Grab a thesaurus and try to develop your vocabulary.
Can you include a sentence with an embedded clause?
Can you include a complex sentence?
How have you started your sentences? Are they varied?

SPaG

effect =/= affect.
Affect means to influence
or to produce a change in
something.
e.g. the dampness
began to affect my
health
Effect is a noun, and it
means the result of a
change.
e.g. the lethal
effects of hard
drugs.
your =/= youre
Your banana (possessive)
Youre a banana (an
abbreviation of you are)
their/there/theyre
Their car (possessive)
Over there (refers to a
place/location)
Theyre amazing
(abbreviation of they are)
A lot are two separate words!
Alot is incorrect!

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